- 10/28/2014
- Posted by: B Brenner Believes...
- Category: Uncategorized
Radio can take a lesson from songwriters when it comes to storytelling and grabbing attention. Yes the music can make a song memorable, but a well written line in a song can have an even greater impact. When you open the mic, you have seven seconds to capture the listener’s attention or they are gone. Writing a great opening line takes thought, skill and perseverance; plus, you have to do it consistently if you want to win.
What they all have in common is the ability to evoke an emotion or paint a picture in one short sentence. Even if you don’t know the rest of the song, the opening line is intriguing enough to entice you to listen for more.
- Answers the questions: Why will the listener Care? What’s in it for them?
- Contains words that paint a picture or evoke an emotion
- Accomplishes all of that in seven to ten seconds
This formula can also help you when creating blog posts, tweets and texts. People are inundated with so many messages each day. Take the time to make sure your message will be relevant and heard by creating an opening line that demands attention. If you don’t, they will hear “blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah” and those are seven words you never want to be known for.
- Rick James’ “Superfreak”
- The Rolling Stones’ “Jumpin’ Jack Flash”
- The Ramones’ “Blitzkrieg Bop”
- The Beatles’ “I Saw Her Standing There”
- LL Cool J’s “Mama Said Knock You Out!”
- The Carpenters’ “Close to You”
- Beck’s “Loser”
- Carl Perkins’ “Blue Suede Shoes”
- Patti Smith’s “Gloria”
- Bon Jovi’s “Livin’ on a Prayer”